"Laura’s writing is so beautiful and visually descriptive that the reader will lose themselves in this book, blurring the lines between fantasy and reality."

- Lisa, Beta extraordinaire

Thursday, November 19, 2009

Death Scene

Last night I just finished writing my first ever death scene. From what my Beta reader tells me, she cried during the two chapters - twice. Let's just hope my writing translates what Gabriella is feeling in a way that my audience will relate to the characters pain.

On to another topic ... I'd like to add more excerpts for my followers to read, but I want to do it in a way that it won't give away any of the secrets of my book ... so, I'd like to invite you all to ask me questions about my book, and I will answer them, if I can. Then - according to your questions - I will try to find some excerpts I can add pertaining to those questions!

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Chapter one is located to your right. Enjoy!

Thanks!

Laura

2 comments:

  1. Your beta cried twice in that one particular "read through." I cried at a different part in the first draft! It's a tear jerker!!! Way to go Lola!!!

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  2. I have a question. Who is the sexiest male human in Shadow of the Sun?

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